Really worth the time
Good music, nice art and animation, cool crossover, etc. blah blah.
In short: just awesome.
Although I miss an option to see the lyrics.
Oh, and the change of costumes with every playthrough is a funny gimmick.
Wait a sec... do I see a reference to "A Harry Potter Musical", that is, Rumbleroar in person and near Pigfarts? Hell yeah!
Gasp... Gasp... Gaspar!
Wait, did I just get rickroll'd by Gaspar? Wow... I guess the Guru of Time and the Guru Josh of Inifity may collaborate someday.
So, just want to say how incredible the series is. Love the special Chronopolis scene too. Just keep'em coming (pwetty pwease with sugar on top...).
Only thing is, a forward button might be useful, if you miss the secret-scene-activating-button it's kinda time-consuming to watch the whole thing again and knowing all the puns... although it wasn't too hard this time to hit it in the first run.
So a 5/5 and a 9/10, 'nuff said.
Fear not, we do intend to keep making these. Also, the proper terminology might be GasparRoll'd. I'm especially pleased you liked the Chronopolis scene, as I was some what worried how many people would actually understand all of the dialogue in that scene.
I will consider adding a bail to title screen feature in Episode 22.
Nice game. Reminds me somehow of Space Invaders. A good concept and the music is awesome (no surprise, since it's one of NemesisTheory's masterpieces).
But it gets really difficult after a short time (or maybe I just suck at this type of game).
You got my vote. 5/5, 8/10
I really like the game. It's a fresh concept, being the asteroid who is usually the target and striking back. The music fits and creates a good mood.
And decreasing in size with less "health" helps avoiding the enemy.
I would recommend to change the graphics to a... well.. higher standard level, but since you wanted to take it back to the roots, the retro-style is quite good.
It's a start...
Regarding the fact that it is your first song, it is ok. Not good, but not too bad either.
A few important points:
- Too repetitive. It seems to be the same 10-second-part over and over again, just to reach the 3 minutes. If there is nothing new, then cut it. Make a 10sec-loop out of it.
- Layers are out of sync. The drums don't work with the strings, the strings hardly fit the piano. There's no beat to the whole thing, it's just a mixture of different beats. Which don't harmonize.
- As a beginner, keep it simple. Make an interesting melody and apply it to one instrument. If that sounds the way it should, you may add some more instruments, which don't have a stand-alone melody but compliment the main theme. Don't try to start with the whole polyphonal-orchestrated-thingy.
So... I hope some of those notes are able to help you. (Hm, weird, giving tips without having submitted anything myself... ) Still, I guess they might be of use.
And don't give up :)
Thanks for the help. Yeah even I dont much like it. :)
Very tame blizzard...
I can hear the frost :D
But it does not equal a deadly blizzard, with sharp needles of ice piercing my skin. It sounds more like an icy cavern where the light is reflected by the mirror-like walls, emitting emotions of solitude and calmness.
It would fit into a game, but then you should change the drums. Not taking them out, but... making them more background-ish.
If you want to keep the concept of a blizzard, it clearly should be more aggressive.
3/5 and 7/10 for you
Good, with a lot of potential
Only a rating of 2.00 ? I think it is better than that...
What's good: Very nice motif, wonderful progression through many harmonizing instruments, slightly "epic" touch to it
What needs work: The song is pretty repetitive. Around 0:40 I thought that the main part should kick in, but there only were the same ascending notes over and over.
So what I want to say: You have a very good basis to work on, the theme has great potential. But it doesn't sound "complete". It lacks a real melody and proceeds from the intro straight to the outro.
Keep up the good work, 4/5 and 7/10 for you.
lol thanks! i like these reviews and i agree with all this!
i am gonna work on it some more when i get my keyboard!!
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